There was a big jump in the number of entries this year, both in the Great Mission Statement category and in the Mission Statement Makeover category. It will take us some time to work our way through the Makeover entries, so stay tuned for that.
To select the semifinalists, I invited three colleagues with nonprofit writing and editing expertise to join me. They were:
Claire Axelrad, Principal, Axelrad Social Benefit Consulting
Scott Bechtler-Levin, Vice President for Collective Impact, Good Done Great
Hillel Bromberg, Director of Grants Development and Administration, Families United in Educational Leadership
Early last week we sifted through a lot of mission statements from very diverse group of organizations that appear to be doing great work across the globe (see last Tuesdays blog post), managed to pick six semi-finalists in the Great Statement category and presented them in our webinar Whats a Mission Statement Worth?
Help us to pick the winner
Please take a look at the finalists (below) and help us to select the best of the best. To weigh in, submit comments to this blog. Youre welcome to make a pitch for your organizations mission statement, but no anonymous comments please. We will consider only attributed comments, and post only ones that make a case for why the statement meets either the criteria for excellence summarized below or your own.
During the webinar we described the role of a mission statement, noted its critical characteristics, and shared examples of different kinds of successfuland almost successfulones.
Briefly summarized, a mission statement has external and internal functions.
- Externally, a mission statement is a branding and positioning tool that gets and holds the attention of the public, and underpins the case for giving.
- Internally, a mission statement should inspire stakeholders, provide clarity and focus for operations, fortify strategic thinking, structure planning, and point to metrics that will indicate successes.
Some mission statements are very close to taglines, primarily aimed at grabbing attention ; others are crafted more to differentiate one organization from others in the same field. Each nonprofit has its own set of issues, and somewhat different criteria for its mission statement. But in broad terms, a mission statement should articulate the essence of why your organization exists. It can encompass what you are, but should avoid explaining what you do and how. It should be accurate (specific, sufficiently broad, appropriately focused), accessible (concise, simply stated, jargon-free) and effective (differentiating, memorable, compelling).
For more detail on these points you can access the slides or a recording of the webinar and/or take a look at Critical Issues #7: On Mission.
Well announce the winner in mid-December.
Literacy Advance of HoustonTransforming lives and communities through the doorway of literacy.
This statement is succinct, compelling and memorable. The words are all well-chosen and vivid. It is very much a why statement, not a how. Scott said that he liked the word picture (doorway of literacy) and the focus on outcome. Claire thought the statement would make a great tagline. Hillel: its evocative and inclusive, and implies the impact of literacy education. The wording offers a nice visual image.
People for Parks, Los AngelesPeople for Parks works for the day that all kids in Los Angeles are within walking distance of a safe park.
During the webinar I mentioned the overlap among mission statements, taglines and vision statements. Just as the previous statement could be a tagline, this statement could be a vision statement, but that does not make it any the less powerful as a mission statement. Claire: Aspirational, simple, clear and direct. I can already picture the children being helped. Scott Their vision is compelling.
San Diego CoastkeeperSan Diego Coastkeeper aims to protect and restore fishable, swimmable and drinkable waters in San Diego County.
The explanation submitted with this entry sums up my assessment: In 17 words, San Diego Coastkeeper
provides the image of people actively fighting and protecting our waters for a better future
. Using descriptive words, it provides a picture of what we could have if we just work for it.Hillel: The unusual usage of words grabs attention and makes their goals clear and memorable. Scott: I like that it humanizes the benefit of the work they do. Disclaimer: I live / work / surf / sail in San Diego County (but I have no direct relationship).
Please comment below to help us select the winner.
The other semifinalists:
Can Do CaninesCan Do Canines is dedicated to enhancing the quality of life for people with disabilities by creating mutually beneficial partnerships with specially trained dogs.HALO TrustGetting mines out of the ground, now.Humane Society of Flower MoundThe Humane Society of Flower Mound is dedicated to promoting a respectful, responsible, and compassionate relationship between animals and people.